Poltergeist Vol. 2

3 Comments on Poltergeist Vol. 2

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   xblurp

   September 21, 2024 at 6:02 am (2 weeks ago)

   The idea and continuation is nice. It’s somewhat rare in possession content to continue seeing what happens with the host after the possessor takes over so it was nice to see that.

   But the editing, lack of sound effects in certain areas, rushed pacing of the scenes, and overall video seemed disappointing. It had promise and could of done better seemingly going the route of Soul Vore which again was unexpected but a nice attempt. Doesn’t make sense to me regarding the story as Amirah being the ghost should be more powerful in this situation but Veronica apparently pulls through and devours her spirit. It felt unfinished during the unbirthing scene which had Amirah repeat her lines 3 times. Rather egregious. And half done since we only see Veronica devour her up to her thigh before it cuts to her being completely inside of Veronica’ Soul. I imagine if there is a part 3 then maybe Amirah could come back by Trojan Possessing Veronica’s spirit as well, but I guess we’ll have to see.

   There could of been a bit more dialogue, but the little there was during the sex was nice as they sex fought for control. I do think it was odd Veronica had the white eyes even if she was a soul, but that’s a nitpick. Sound effects could of been used to enhance things more, especially when Veronica starts taking back control of her body in the beginning. I think it’s most disappointing in that it had many routes it could of taken from Trojan possession, to Amirah devouring Veronica’s soul to retain control, or Amirah being transferred to another host or expelled that choosing to have Veronica devour Amirah was possibly the weakest choice due to how it was portrayed in relation with the previous story. If we had more reason for why Veronica was able to suddenly overpower Amirah it might of worked out better. On it’s own, its ok at best, but with needed improvement.

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     xblurp

     September 23, 2024 at 12:22 am (2 weeks ago)

     That is to say, cuz my comment probably came off a bit more negative than I meant it to, that had it not been for problems behind the scenes this could of been an even better video.

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   psychic715

   September 21, 2024 at 11:46 am (2 weeks ago)

   I enjoyed how Veronica vored Amirah from behind her.

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